英语新概念2-回译法-lesson10

We have a old musical instrument. It is called a cla_______ and made in Germany in 1681. We had this instrument for a long time.It was bought by my grandfather.Recently, It was broken by a visitor because I she played for Jazz. She bitted the key too hard and broken two ____.My father was surprised and didn’t allow us to touch it.My father’s friend is fitting it.

翻译中的错误和改进建议：

1. “We have a old musical instrument”：应该是 “an old” 而不是 “a old”，因为“an”用于以元音开头的词前。改为 “We have an old musical instrument.”。
2. “It is called a cla_______”：根据描述，应该是“古钢琴”，正确的词是 “clavichord”。因此，这一部分改为 “It is called a clavichord and was made in Germany in 1681.”。
3. “We had this instrument for a long time.”：这个时态不正确，应该用现在完成时，改为 “We have had this instrument for a long time.”。
4. “It was broken by a visitor because she played for Jazz”：这里的 “for” 不合适，改为 “played Jazz” 或 “played Jazz on it”。因此，这句话可以改为 “It was broken by a visitor because she played Jazz on it.”。
5. “She bitted the key too hard”：这里的 “bitted” 是错误的，应该用 “struck” 或 “hit”。正确的句子是 “She struck the keys too hard.”。
6. “broken two ____”：这个空格部分应该是指“琴弦”，正确的词是 “strings”。所以完整句子是 “She struck the keys too hard and broke two strings.”。
7. “My father’s friend is fitting it”：这里的 “fitting” 不太准确，应该用 “fixing” 或 “repairing”。因此，改为 “My father’s friend is fixing it.”。

最终的翻译如下：

We have an old musical instrument. It is called a clavichord and was made in Germany in 1681. We have had this instrument for a long time. It was bought by my grandfather. Recently, it was broken by a visitor because she played Jazz on it. She struck the keys too hard and broke two strings. My father was surprised and didn’t allow us to touch it. My father’s friend is fixing it.